This is my rather rough draft of a Manga. I primarily used Katakana for onomatopoeia and for foreign loan words. I also employed Katakana as a means of emphasis when the students are overcome with emotion.
おねがいします！
Great job, now when is the next installment coming out? I found the style consistent and quite expressive. The writing was a little hard to read sometimes though--although this is probably a product of posting to the internet.
Is the 中医 supposed to be 中国? And the final question パンタサン supposed to be パンダサン? I am not sure, I may have missed something.
あなたのまんがはすごいです！えはとてもきれいです。そしてたのしいです。
ReplyDeleteas we discussed in class, don't forget that 「9 o'clock」はにほんごで「くじ」です。そして「きゅう」じゃありません。「きょう」です。
でも、わたしはあなたのまんががすきです！
Great job, now when is the next installment coming out? I found the style consistent and quite expressive. The writing was a little hard to read sometimes though--although this is probably a product of posting to the internet.
ReplyDeleteIs the 中医 supposed to be 中国? And the final question パンタサン supposed to be パンダサン? I am not sure, I may have missed something.
パンダサン！
ReplyDeleteGreat work! I haven't seen many manga yet in this literary project.
Is this to be continued?
ha HA ha
ReplyDeleteすごいですね。わたしはパンダがすきです。
Is this to be continued? I hope it is because it is adorable. :)
Keep up the good work!
がんばって！
いいです！えはすごいです。
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ReplyDeleteえはいいですね。でも、すみません、わたしのイメージスキャナはよくないです。たかくないですから。 Still I think it came out good enough for everyone to see your artistic talent! すごい！
ReplyDeleteすぐおいいい。You should start a manga about our Japanese class. Fo sho.
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